[BerntR]

Hi Grant,

Looking at the last video;

I still think there's an OTT tendency in your swing. Not with regards to plane and external references, but with regards to your shoulder turn.

You're dipping your right shoulder through impact - pretty much like Paula Creamer. She gets away with it (at least she did last week), but it is not the best way. You should be dipping it during transition instead. Hip forward & right shoulder down. The hands will follow. Then turn through.

If dipping is problematic for you, you need a flatter swing plane.